#COVER LETTER EXAMPLE REDDIT PROFESSIONAL#

I am aware it is highly unusual for undergraduates from average universities like (BLOCKED) to intern at (BLOCKED), but nevertheless, I was hoping you might make an exception. I am writing to inquire about a possible summer internship in your office. I just wanted to thank you for taking the time to talk with me that night. I met you the summer before last at Smith & Wollensky's in New York when I was touring the east coast with my uncle, (BLOCKED). My name is (BLOCKED), and I am an undergraduate finance student at (BLOCKED). Side note: The research report had a lot of opinions and not a lot of facts, and it lacked connections between really basic facts about the current state of the business to the 'projections'. If there is any doubt at all about including a 'research report', do not do it. Your research probably sucks unless you've been doing it professionally. If you're thinking of including a research report on a company when you're cold emailing people, it's a high-risk strategy. He uses four valuation methodologies on the stock with the sole intention of showing that he knows more than one valuation method. It's painfully obvious by reading the report. He's clearly never done anything but 'book learn' on these subjects. It made a weak applicant look even worse. The report should have never been attached. Don't you think about the stuff you write before you blast it out to hundreds of potential employers? Anyone that reads it will certainly never hire you. ('ticker') and believe that, at the current price of $10.00, trades at a 123% discount to my estimated fair market value of $22.30' (Both made up numbers to scale to the actual numbers listed in the 'report')ġ23% discount? C'mon man. 'I am placing a STRONG BUY recommendation on. Since he thought it was worth including, I assume the report was something he was proud of, but it was cringe-worthy. Revealing Your Ignorance:Įven worse than just plain ignorance, is the below quote from an attached research report that a candidate had written. Who wants to hire someone who's unlucky? It seems the bad luck streak started in utero, if you ask us. Please do not pin all of your circumstance on luck, especially in a cover letter.Įven if the reader is a big believer in luck, you're telling him you're unlucky. If you were halfway decent, you could have squeaked in the industry in more than a few of those years. I remember at least a few of those as being pretty good years. You graduated from college 10 years ago, by the way. What goes on in the recruiters head: I'm almost certain you would be a terrible employee just by the quality of the work you sent me in a cold email. However, I am 100% committed and motivated to prove myself in a finance position.'īad luck? No, it's the shitty and difficult-to-read resume, cover letter, and 'research reports' that are the issue. I believe that was just due to bad luck due to graduating from my MBA program at the height of the 'Great Recession'.

#COVER LETTER EXAMPLE REDDIT PROFESSIONAL#

'I realize I have more professional experience in technology than in finance. This is an example of an excuse in a cover letter: Here are some of the usual mistakes candidates make in their cover letter as mentioned by our member Excuses: If you've talked to someone at the firm and they'd remember you, DO namedrop them in your cover letter. I think cover letters are better when they are focused on your past work experience as opposed to general and arbitrary sentiments about how you are a 'hard worker and team player with a strict attention to detail'. That way I know you have done your homework, and I can ask the person you talked to how your chat was. Blackice: The best thing you can do is name drop people you have talked to.

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